Book review 14 (I wish)

“It’s lonely without my friends. Oh, I wish they were still here.”

I read a book. The book’s name was “I wish”. It was like the Aladdin. It was very interesting for me. Three boys appear in this book. Their names are Ron, Pele and Pete. They do not like school. “I hate school” moaned Pele. “I hate reading and writing”. I think so too. “Dudes, why do not we run away to the Pacific Ocean for our holidays?” said Pele. I think that it is nice idea. I want to go to Pacific Ocean too. Ron’s uncle has yacht. It is lucky. A week later, the three friends were sailing across the Pacific Ocean. I think that I can not that thing. Pete cooked the fish. I’m hungry now. Day after day, they sailed across the Pacific Ocean. I think there are no work, no school, just the open sea and the blue sky. It is freedom. One day, the blue sky turned black. I think it is a storm. Pele watched a green spot bobbing up and down on the wave. They took the bottle. Suddenly, in a cloud of smoke, the cork shot out of the bottle. The boys looked up and saw a giant genie. I think that it is the Aladdin. I think that I want bottle.

Jack G, 2007, “I wish” TOMSON*NELSON, Victoria
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